Chose to be Bothered
I think it is important to be bothered because if you are bothered by things then you will want to fix that and when you fix that or create it then that's how humans will invent things or advance in life. An example is that when i was in first grade, I was doing really bad in math and i wanted to fix that so i kept practicing and practicing so now i can do two grades above in math. Another example in regular life is medicine. If people weren't trying to fix all these sicknesses and diseases then even a few mosquito bites could be sever. But because people wanted to fix that they made medicine so now we don't have to worry about some sicknesses and diseases.
Love your writing i can really connect to it I love the way you relate it to your personal life and the world around you. Do you think you can improve this in anyway
ReplyDeleteThank you for the advice I think that I could improve by adding more examples
DeleteFantastic job Rohit! I love how you brought in struggles such as math into your article to clarify what you were saying because that is something many of us can relate to. You are absolutely right that if humans were never bothered by anything we would never progress in life. Excellent work.
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DeleteI totally agree with you Rohit. When I first started trumpet I couldn't really play anything. Now, after working hard, I love it and have a strong passion I found. This wouldn´t have happened if I quit.
ReplyDeleteYes, playing the trumpet sounds very hard and that might of took a lot more effort
Deletei like how you gave advise to fix something if its bothering you and not just have it keep bothering you
ReplyDeleteI like how you brought real life problems in your blog and your examples your good like your math example. Nice Job
ReplyDeleteAt first I was not sure about which examples to use but then used the first ones that came to my mind
DeleteNice Job! I enjoyed the story you told of when you were in first grade, it made me think of when I joined the swim team. I was slower then everybody else and I had started late but I worked hard and got faster.
ReplyDeleteI also used to do swimming but then i quit and it is cool to see you on a swim team
Deletei agree with your answers like how you brought likes problems nice job
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